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Haiku About my Kids

Posted on 18 November, 2012 by dilovelyadmin

I am not a poet. Still, sometimes life seems a bit more manageable with a prescribed number of syllables, doesn’t it?

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Small furious boy

growls and pounds the couch cushions

his mind filled with NO.

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When a little guy

endeavours to create art

his tongue must stick out.

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Blue eyes gazing up

cluster of balloons rising

face aglow with joy.

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Tiny daughter howls

right to the end of her breath

trapped in wakefulness.

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Baby’s deep-pool stare

all innocence and wonder

irresistible.

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Slack sleeping faces

perfect delicate features

so lovely it hurts.

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We just ride the waves

frustration and elation

hard but still worth it.

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8 thoughts on “Haiku About my Kids”

  1. emerge says:
    18 November, 2012 at 11:22 pm

    oh, whose were the blue eyes? glad they liked the balloons. ev said that one of the balloons popped – oh dear! did it encounter stucco? so many of our ceilings are dangerous…

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    1. diblog says:
      19 November, 2012 at 1:31 pm

      emerge, they were E’s blue eyes. When he realized he could pull on them and they would float back up… it was that awesome grin, like the “wingardium leviosa” moment. Sigh.

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  2. Julia says:
    18 November, 2012 at 11:39 pm

    Love this. I also adore poetry; there’s something almost magical about its cadence.

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    1. diblog says:
      19 November, 2012 at 1:32 pm

      Julia, I’ve noticed your everyday writing is full of poetic rhythm – I figured it must be the music in you!

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  3. Mama says:
    19 November, 2012 at 11:43 am

    Sigh. Just lovely. What a journey, n’est-ce pas?

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    1. diblog says:
      19 November, 2012 at 3:42 pm

      Mama, I think of you whenever I write anything resembling poetry. 🙂

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  4. Larks says:
    19 November, 2012 at 4:52 pm

    Nice haikus. I laughed out loud at “his mind filled with NO.” Ah, parenting. Good times.

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    1. diblog says:
      19 November, 2012 at 6:21 pm

      Thanks, Larks – I’m guessing all of us have had THOSE moments – as you say, good times! Had one just today when I told my son his time with the iPhone was up… lovely memories to cherish. 😉

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